8/5/26 (1) What I like and why: I’ve read this story already. This is an expanded version of the previous story about Pooh getting stuck in Rabbit’s front door. My favorite part was when Pooh rolls himself in mud to pretend to be a little black storm cloud to fool the bees. That’s silly!
(2) Techniques: connecting the beginning when Pooh tries to get into a honey tree hole to the end when Pooh pops out of Rabbit’s front door and landed right inside the tree hole.
-Rabbit drawing a moose on Pooh’s butt is funny to kids.
-Trying to fool someone is funny to kids.
(3) My Story: I’m going to focus on ways a character can do to fool another character. I’m going to work on the alien ship story and how the animals try to fool the mysterious scary alien.
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